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Hi
this is a poem I wrote for Ruthio and Arron
today...
..and, it's called
"Stop Making Sense, an Alternative Love Song" by Izzy Brittain
Give me self-consciously clumsy
Over polished, any day.
At least it's honest
Let’s record the trips, the falls, break-beats and bare feet
Treading carefully around broken bottles, and deceit.
The way I look at it, Let us not fight it.
Give thanks to the anti-heroes, the weirdos
The character building moments
In our own personal histories of romance.
Take the film noir flaws and the classic themes
Like love and death and the price of wheat...
Don’t deny it
Those tripped, lost beats are what got us here.
Can we chuck them all on a loop pedal?
Throw in some effects
Make it hymnal?
Take petals, pluck them from the floor of a field covered in plastic bottles
Sing all your tired struggles into a hairbrush
Let go
Throw in all that you don’t know and really wish you understood
But still hold close
And always, take time to recover.
Give us years of meandering prattle
Play us miniature battles then leave us, in silence
Before whip cracks and wonder erupt in abundance.
Show me gyrating hips
We are the lords and ladies of the wedding dances
We require sweet musics to provoke bumwaggles and 'balter'
An old English term for dancing artlessly
without particular grace or skill but with
Extreme Joy!
And for this Give us our fill of flippant fuckwittery
Alongside independence
the kind that we can retain amongst people
Harmonise the impractical, whimsical elements
With the need to make money to feed ourselves and the desire to hone love in a slow way
Like they did in the old days
Don't forget a reprise a touch of compromise
And give me regular bouts of incoherence
Make notes about moments standing one on top of the other
Depicting mountains or.. Trans Siberian express journeys
Because I can’t decide whether to mention
London, or Melbourne, or the Alps or a shiny Northern Soul dance floor
Or if a good old cliché will be enough
And if grit can ever be entwined with idealism?
Don’t mention contracts, or imperfection.
We're after glitter Glitter and the grace of something greater
Make symphonies out of real-life love stories That are long and sometimes boring
transcendental, but also dumb, And exist, like this one
Between the headlines, pragmatic, yet poetic.
Defiant against the latest coup, and all that bloody horrible news
To hold us close with a rocking motion, Something melodious, yes.. and gentle.
Let's shove all this on a loop pedal
Throw in some effects
Make it hymnal.
Create a rhythm that’s the sum of all our parts, In bite-sized chunks of guts and arms
Not manageable Like a flexible, affordable workspace
Give us a paradoxical Unintelligible lovesong, crack on!
Compose confused hearts and improvise riffs on ancient history
Bring in all the ludicrous myths and the legends, The folk tales and the bringers of mystery
The plus ones of prophecy, Make a lament for the ships, the clocks and the stars
And the masters of astronomy
Open the soundbites and samples from the cabinet of our sop and our soft animal curiosities.
Give it strings like Shostakovich and jazz pianist’s fingers, Sound us a tortoise shell and a honey drum when we need them.
Include 101 ways to achieve consensus, but remember
you’ve still got to find it in your own mind first.
Give us cheese. Like, really good cheese that doesn’t squeak
The kind of guilty pleasure you can dance to, If you’re not too cool that is.
And be sure to end it all on a high note
Something rhapsodic, operatic, orchestral
Take all our preconceived notions of love, And smother them, with a song.
Can we put all this on a loop pedal please – Throw in some effects – make it...
HYMNAL!
Thank you Izzy. You are amazing. Love PitBun x